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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:35 pm

e prea fixat oral pe gustul meu
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:37 pm

acest anal retentive, gambianconul.

andy iubita vrei sa treci p-aci sa iti arat ceva? :)

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:42 pm

colectia lui de surprize ulker
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:44 pm

de surprize sliquid

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:45 pm

bonibon
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:46 pm

uite, gamma e curios, arata-i lui.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:49 pm

hai lasa ca si tu esti curioasa.
sper ca ai us niste servetele pe scaun, sa nu murdaresti

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:56 pm

daca as vrea sa iti raspund la fel ti-as zice ca iti treb si tie, sa te stergi la gura cand iti termini treaba.
dar4 suntem colegi de forum, nu pot.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Sun Feb 03, 2013 11:06 pm

sentimentul meu e ca v-ati limita amandoi la mancat o saorma cu de toate
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Mon Feb 04, 2013 12:49 am

nu, ca ingrasa. tu dintre toti chiar trebuie ca STII ce vreau sa zic
ontopic, ca vad ca ati uitat ca sunteti pe un TOPIC
poezie

se numeste "Ieri", sau titlul alternativ pe care il recomand in traducerile in lb franceza si este inspirata dintr-o intamplare R E A L A

A mon amie, Andi'

plin vazduhul de cicoare
primavara a venit
Im ar f caprioare
ce-ar mai vrea...;
dar au fugit

printre flori de sunatoare
toporasi si campanula
o privesc arzand pe andy:
a venit sa-mi s

ma asez sezand in coate
ierburile imi sunt perna
si ma uit lungit la andy
ce degust-un kil de
s
a
m
d

ei sa ziceti voi ca n-am talent

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:03 am

discleimar:
aceasta poezie este un pamflet si rog sa fie tratata ca atare. userita andy se bucura altfel fie spus de o inalta consideratie si de cel mai adanc respect din parte mea, afecte bazate pe indelungata noastra coabitare virtuala pe aici.
si in definitiv, ce ar fi arta daca nu ar fi grevata de incercarile sufletelor noastre for bending rules, de a crea emotii puternice si vii, reale... in acest spirit practic aceasta poezie este un act de arta si daca nu merita poate aplauze din partea cititorilor nepregatiti pentru avangarda, macar merita ingaduinta si o privire atenta asupra esentei sale pur estetice.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:43 am

ma respecti adanc?

a-nflorit floarea de tei,
dragi colegi, trident e gay.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:01 am

adanc. pot ajunge pana la unghiul splenic
PE BUNE

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:21 am

incepAnd din spatiul subdiafragmatic stang.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Mon Feb 04, 2013 11:47 am

da, dar trecand prin gaura ROTUNDA, cu scurt pasaj in confluens sinuum tongue3.gif

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Mon Feb 04, 2013 12:58 pm

Aroma dragostei pluteste pe papilele
Nascandei
Bulina
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby Phat Skidz » Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:57 pm

Ma scaprin la
Nas când
Văz pe-alina
Născând
Îi dau una
Na, scând-
ura rup pe ea.
and in the eyes of the jackal i say kaboom

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:13 pm

Nu iti lovi nasul
Ca te va durea
Ia-ti tu bicicleta
Si du-te ....!

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:08 pm

eu nu pot naste versuri vulgare, ma caznesc si nu imi vine nimic. sper sa fie ceva trecator.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:41 pm

Nascanda placenta
Zambea puritan
Din burta decenta
Cobora un ghiortan

Copil de chivuta
Atarnat de pripon
Alinuta cu...matza
Se juca la sifon
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:31 am

baaa
mi-ati stes poeziaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Tue Feb 05, 2013 11:44 am

Toti poetii ratati zic asta. Ce, nu mai merge copy paste din nou?
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Tue Feb 05, 2013 12:21 pm

care poezie? aia cu Im care ar f caprioare? e tot acolo, nu te mai isteriza.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Tue Feb 05, 2013 4:48 pm

nu, nuuuu, nu
era una misto
dintr-aia cu caprioare fuge, gama di ne su..gativa s-a-mbibat, gamma di e consti
asa ceva. nu mai stiu versurile.

sa stiti astia care sterge ca poezia erotica sau obscena este tot o forma de arta.
asa cum e pictura naiva de exemplu. ce sa stiti voi. voi daca veedeti ca scrie "nascanda"ziceti ca e poezie de tot.
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Tue Feb 05, 2013 5:45 pm

Critic de arta trebuia te faci tu
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Tue Feb 05, 2013 6:20 pm

vaai, ce am pierdut! imi simt imbogatirea culturala impiedicata de cel care a sters poemul lui trident.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby Dan » Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:48 am

ia mai gaseste tu niste metafore la c.., p..., s... si mai discutam.
Eu din muntii mei...
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:46 am

andy, au pus catuse florilor!

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Wed Feb 06, 2013 10:38 am

si au rupt aripile la vrabiute.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:53 pm

vrabiuta vrabiuta, sa...
oaie, oaie, sa ...
cititi ma poezie? da pe bune, ma refer la astia normali, nu ciudatii gen vlad care cu poeziile.
asa, pe bune: uite nu il vad pe gama bi asezandu-se cu o carte de pozeii in fata. (bine, il vad cu o saorma mare, cu portie de cartofi prajiti, dar nu cu un Volum de poezii)

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Wed Feb 06, 2013 3:20 pm

am citit prin facultate un volum de al lui Petofi. ff fbun. la poezia "apostolul" am plans.
mai recent am citit de ale lui edgar alan poe. misto si asta.

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Wed Feb 06, 2013 7:57 pm

Pupa-i-ai poala popii Mufi
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Wed Feb 06, 2013 11:57 pm

iakoykutawa, GâlmaDI

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:29 am

Cred ca logic ar fi fost sa yeykoyukutawa , daca tot esti opsedat de gramatici

Frigul diminetii
Patrunda-ti in pleoape
Cand umbra tristetii
Ramana-ti aproape

Cu ochiul strapuns
Privirea inghetata
Pastreaza ascunsa
Privelistea roata

Prin gri si ciment
Prin moloz si rugina
Ridica-ti absent
Rasuflarea venina

Nascanda nevroza
Al orasului neg
Angoasa la doza
Sobolanii din jeg

Si frigul diminetii
Patrunda-ti in soapte
E doar ceasul vietii
Scursura din noapte
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:18 pm

ce prozodie proasta

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:24 pm

Serveste cu multa apa
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Wed Feb 13, 2013 10:33 am

gata, ni s-a epuizat talentul, nu mai zicem si noi nimic?

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby 187.92a » Thu Feb 14, 2013 2:13 am

eu cand aud sintagma "de umplutura" ma gandesc la felul in care iese andy in evidenta

gamadi, dar tu esti cum sa zic, poet cam ca calinescu, sau nu, stai: ca lovinescu :) da, mai ales ca asta din urma
sau ca perpesicus, sau topirceanu

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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby GammaDi » Thu Feb 14, 2013 9:33 am

Toparceanu e poetul meu preferat, stuffy.
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Re: Nobili si sentimentali

Postby andy gavrilescu » Thu Feb 14, 2013 9:35 am

TU, alina, esti cel care UMPLE tot forumul.


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